To celebrate what I hope will be a wonderful Christmas for my readers, Ordo Lupus and the Temple Gate – Second Edition, featuring shifter mythology (if you love vampire or werewolf sex, this is for you) will be free from 23-27 December on Amazon:https://bit.ly/1gWteFq
Temple Gate, werewolf sex, occult gates: hope you enjoy it! Tell your friends.
Just a friendly reminded to all you authors out there that I still edit books. Check my Editing Services page for my portfolio and charges. I look forward to hearing from any writers that need a good editor.
Testimony on Lazlo’s editing work by author Amit Bobrov:
“Lazlo’s the best editor I’ve worked with, and I’ve worked with a few. He took an already successful novel and found every imaginable flaw, corrected dialogues, fixed my grammar and altered key scenes to make them more exciting. He’s a fountain of creativity and knowledge. When I showed my Publisher his version of my novel they were speechless and this was a novel that three previous editor worked on.”
The Devil’s Own Dice is mostly set in 13th Century Burgundy, France and covers the great Battle of Bouvines, which shaped Europe for the next few hundred years. I have had a look on the internet for any tours of the battle sites in the book and the best I can come up with is Battlefield Tours by Leger Holidays who have many tours to France, mostly for battles of WWII.
But they also do a tour of Burgundy so that might be worth checking out.
Why is a notorious religious cult of assassins keeping him alive?
A former WWII MI6 agent, our anonymous hero is suspected of the crime by the police and his divorcing wife.
With strange powers of foresight, he goes on the run to clear his name. He has only one friend, a historian and member of the modern Knights Hospitaller, but with this help, he embarks on a white-knuckle ride to salvation.
In Paris, a witch servant of the mysterious Catholic assassin sect Concilium Putus Visum seduces him during his quest for the secret weapon of the Cathars. If he can solve a puzzling set of clues to find the weapon, he might kill the monster and save his marriage.
But why do the assassins and the vampire snakes seem to be protecting him? Why is his grandfather’s body no longer where it should be; in his grave? What supernatural secret about the family was the old man trying to reveal to him before he died?
Lovers of Dan Brown’s evocative mix of mystery and history will love this Occult Thriller – a dark and powerful, nerve-shredding tale, which neatly deftly combines crime thriller aspects with the occult and historical.
If you love sexy witches, sexy vampires and sexy werewolves, you will adore The Devil’s Own Dice.
From Lazlo Ferran
My own family’s roots, uncovered gradually over ten years of concerted research had led me to one Guillaume – a Chevalier (Knight) in 13th Century Languedoc, France. He was my earliest ancestor. Simultaneously, I was pursuing a theological interest in the Cathars; first through reading a number of books by Henry Lincoln, and later an interest in Monségur and the Rennes-le-Château, near where the lost treasure of the Cathars is said to be hidden. The Cathars were an ancient sect who came to prominence and were ruthlessly persecuted by the Catholics in the 1300s, mainly in and around the Languedoc Region of France. Their beliefs were gradually imported from the Mediterranean via the Balkans and possibly originated in Paulian beliefs in post-Roman Istanbul (ancient Constantinople). They believed that the Christian god was really Rex Mundi, or ‘God of Earth’ and that he was an illusion created by dark forces, while the real God remains hidden somewhere outside Earth. I quite possibly sympathise with the Cathars, because my later ancestors probably escaped the Catholic persecution of Huguenots when they came to England in the 1500s.
These two areas of interest came together for me when I discovered that one of my ancestors, a Knight in Nevers, Burgundy during the 1200s, was cast out by the Catholic Church and prosecuted for some unknown violation. It resulted in him having to pay the church an annual tithe of a man’s weight in wheat. What his misdemeanour was, I cannot say, but he was certainly very wealthy and his daughter married well, so it must have been a personal crime against the Church. Was he a heretic, or even a Cathar, even though officially they had all been killed in Monségur 200 years before? I may never know, but it started a train of thought which led to me deciding to write a book about heresy in France, and the political implications for a country that was being slowly formed from part of the Frankish Empire.
A year before I started this work, I read both The Da Vinci Code and Angels and Demons by Dan Brown. These books were certainly an influence on me, and Dan Brown’s masterful handling of the subject matter was an inspiration. Like him I have been fascinated for many years by the rumour or myth that Mary went to France and that Jesus had a descendant. Like him and many others, I speculate that the Cathars did in fact smuggle a great treasure out of Monségur castle, under the noses of the Royalist besiegers. I also speculate on what that treasure might be and how it might affect our lives if it were discovered in the modern age.
Around the same time I was starting this work, my interest in the paranormal was focused around reincarnation and lycanthropy (werewolves and vampires). I have always loved old Hammer Horror films and particularly the work of Christopher Lee and Peter Cushing. I have also always been interested in luck, and the constant battle between good and evil, light and dark, and yin and yang; who isn’t? My own luck seems to run in phases or waves; periods of days or even weeks of good luck, followed by periods of very bad luck. I mused that some people have luck so bad that it kills them, whereas others seem to lead a charmed life. I decided that my main character, as well as being physically imperfect, must have some kind of rare interaction with luck and the forces of good and evil.
From there, I developed the idea that luck might have something to do with the effect of the battle between good and evil: that in fact both Satan and God might both have one hand on the tiller of luck. At this point, while researching werewolf history – and in particular its origins in the Balkans which is coincidental with Cathar origins – I stumbled upon the Wikipedia article about Peter Stumpp. Backtracking I found the main article about ‘werewolf‘ and discovered that werewolves – shape-shifters and shape-changers, were not always messengers of evil. Sometimes they could be benevolent. This was a revelation to me. I wanted to write about it. So one of the main themes of the book is the discovery in some characters of deep, powerful – even Biblical – forces at work.
You can see how the various strands of a plot for my book were coming together: imperfect man with intense interest in history discovers in himself a connection with deep, dark and powerful ancient forces. So I started writing. But there, as usual, things took a different turn. Very often, when you write, as soon as a character starts to solidify in your mind, they start to orchestrate their own affairs. My main character quickly became rebellious, simply not doing what I expected. Then I stumbled into a scene in Highgate Cemetery which really forged the soul of the book. As a result, I had to rethink where I was going, and luck suddenly became a much more prominent theme than I had anticipated. There were some strange synchronicities with my own life as I wrote: if the character was experiencing bad luck, I too would seem to experience uncannily bad luck. I began to believe I was on to something. I became quite excited; my book really was going to have some relevancy as well as being a good ‘yarn’. Relevancy is something I strive for. Like J. R. R. Tolkien, I don’t like allegory very much, but I like my stories to have some applicability for the reader; something they can identify and interact with by consideration.
My main character’s involvement with MI6 came about purely by accident: I wanted to write a book about a character whose whole lifespan I could document if I wished. That meant setting the book in the 1980s. From here, it was obvious he would serve actively in World War II, and since he had to be intelligent, he would find his way into the secret departments of Whitehall. His placement in the Balkans was then easy to arrange, as was his meeting with the mysterious Rose, who later becomes his wife. The story opens with their marriage in trouble, which adds poignancy to the already heart-rending start. Much of the material originally set in Sofia was felt unnecessary by some readers so was removed from the Second Edition. However, if you wish, you can purchase the Extended Edition which includes this content – almost 15,000 words.
Another feature I wanted to have was deeper characterisation. I don’t denigrate what J. K. Rowling has done for fiction’s popularity with Harry Potter, but I wanted to write something more than a mere fantasy. I endeavoured to achieve this. Some of my characters are world-weary, but all have the tell-tale footprints of life all over them. My novel is a fantasy for adults. Yet another theme is Witchcraft. I have long been interested in the influence of Gurdjieff and Mdm. Blavatsky on modern western ideas. I also make frequent references to the Malleus Maleficarum, the witch-hunter’s bible, and wicca, particularly Gardnerian wicca. You will also find references to some cult films such as Eye of the Devil.
The final theme I wanted to get into my novel, was the gothic. The themes of blood, death, eroticism, sex and transcendence are all things that I desire in a good novel. My influences are Kate Bush, The Mission, Lord Byron, John Keats (The Eve of St. Agnes is a particularly favourite poem of mine) and to some extent Tolkien’s Lord of the Rings. Sex and death are the themes that everyone seems attracted to. As a consequence, I couldn’t resist a climax to my novel that took place in one of the world’s greatest Gothic masterpieces. But you will have to read the novel to find out where …
To celebrate, I am giving away the second edition of Ordo Lupus and the Temple Gate: Blood Moon Prophecy Part 1 – the one with the Secret Codes – on Amazon. It’s only free until 2 January so download it now: https://bit.ly/1gWteFq
If vampire sex or werewolf sex is your thing, this is for you! Occult gates, templars, temple gates, vampire sex, werewolf sex: this has it all!
Free Champagne
There is still time to win the FREE BOTTLE OF CHAMPAGNE in my competition which now closes on 1 January 2015, if you sign up for the Newsletter:
Three Free Thrillers
Now you can also get THREE FREE THRILLERS; The Man Who Recreated Himself, The Ice Boat Volume I and The Ice Boat Volume 2 when you sign up for the Newsletter! Don’t want Three Free books? Fair enough!
The Man Who Recreated Himself – Third Edition: (21st Century Prophet and Redeemer Thriller)
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It’s all free here today so, once again, HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Today, something a bit different. I need to think of a new name for the Ordo Lupus Series. The third book, to be published next year, begins to focus more on a good (ie benevolent) vampire and we will see less of Ordo Lupus. However, the story does continue and I don’t see an end to it at the moment so I need a series title which includes ‘Ordo Lupus’ but also suggests the other elements; The Serpents and also the good vampire. The phrase or sentence needs to be of no more than 7 words and I would suggest it should include the word ‘blood.’ Include the word vampire if you like but bear in mind that the Ordo Lupus books are paranormal thrillers and not fantasies.
Ordo Lupus II: The Devil’s Own Dice cover
Please, please give me your ideas by commenting below. The best suggestion wins a free eBook copy of any one of my books. Don’t go away without suggesting something!
Several Lazlo Ferran Newsletter Members have inquired about the short timescale of the competition; Lotus is in Kindle Match and you will get a free kindle when you buy Lotus paperback so you will be able to enter to win the Champagne or $27! Good luck before Christmas. If you haven’t subscribed to the newsletter, now would be a good time: Subscribe me to Newsletter
Don’t forget that Ordo Lupus and the Temple Gate is now FREE on most Amazon sites, Google Play globally, most iTunes (Apple) sites around the world, Books2Read (including FlipKart) and all Bookbaby outlets (including Oyster, txtr and E-Sentral). See my Availability in your country page for more details. If you cannot find it free, email me: lazloferran@gmail.com
While I am preparing the latest Newsletter, here is an interview I did recently for my latest book, Lotus on the Library of Erana website: http://bit.ly/lazinterview
In a world where reality is in doubt, only doubt is real
Robert Lath dies in the trenches of World War One. But he wakes to find himself on a never-ending flight of stone steps. No matter how hard he tries, he cannot reach the top or bottom. Then a face appears and offers him a choice; a choice that might damn his soul.
Six characters from different spans of history battle against illness, seemingly the result of a game with Satan, and human frailty to find salvation but are they all the same man?
A soul is trapped and gradually dissected in this intriguing and labyrinthine story of trust, betrayal, disease, death and immortality.
Other News
It’s a short post this week because I am so busy with the last stages of publishing Lotus. if you are a Newsletter subscriber, there is good news: expect another issue in the next few weeks! I am also excited to announce that I am editing Iron III: Worlds Like Dust for the final time prior to release. If you want your thriller edited by an experience thriller writer and editor, contact me or take a look at my editor rates here.
If you’ve missed it, don’t forget to listen to a preview of Too Bright the Sun with a soundtrack on Booktrack.com.